Both of these camps will let us grow independence. In our life, we normally live with out parents or grandparents and cannot grow independence. They support almost evertything we do and we don't get much chance to grow it. On the other hand, we will be doing everything independently while we are in these camps.For example, we will be going out of our dorms or home-stays with friends independently without parents telling you when to leave. So, these two camps will be able to help you grow independence.
We will be educated very well during these two camps. In Camp Big Apple , you will be able to prepare for your English Language test like SAT. Also, you can study Art by going to museum, or wathching Broad Way show. In Rand West Camp, they can study Math, Art, History ,Science , Politics , World Cultures, Music , Computer Programming and Literature. They will also be able to learn English by speaking Enlgish during the camp.So, we will be educated very well during these two camps.
The amount of time staying in the camp is differnet. In Cmap Big Apple, we stay for nly three weeks but on the other hand, we stay for four weeks in Ranch West Camp.
Things and ways they learn in camp is different. In Camp Big Apple they manily learn about math or prepare for SAT or other important English tests for futrue. Also, n Camp Big Apple we learn from Korean professorswho at least have a Master degree.In contrast, in Ranch West Camp, they learn more subjects they learn in Camp Big Apple. Also, they are taught by Canadian teachers who have graduated form the local University. So, things and ways they learn in these two cmaps are different.
Children's home countries will be different. In Camp Big Apple, there will be children all over the world but in Ranch West Camp, ther will be children who live in or near Canada.
I hope you are able to go to the camp you want to go among these two.
Thank you for reading!
Nice. I like your introduction and it is clear that you are trying to use the transition words. Next time, though, re-read your essay before you publish it. There are a lot of simple typing mistakes there. They can be easily avoided.
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